Technology alone cannot be the solution to the major environmental problems that are faced.
The imbalance in the environment is created by the development of technology. For instance, transportation in earlier days were made use of animals which was environmentally friendly, due to the development of technology the animal-based carriages evolved into vehicles that use petrol as a fuel to power the engines. Petrol, when burnt, releases harmful gases that cause depletion in the Ozone layer, and also increases the level of CO2 in the environment which leads to global warming. Also, extracting petrol from the sea bed affects the ecosystem of the ocean and may lead to a Tsunami.
Although advancement in technology causes an imbalance in nature it can provide solutions to some of the important problems that we face today. For example, advanced technology has paved the way for extracting fuels from new sources of energy like solar, wind and hydraulic energy which we can get from air, water, and sun, and these sources are inexhaustible. The extracted energy can be then used to power automobiles, and even can be used to generate electricity. These resources can be used as a perfect replacement for petrol and other fossil fuels like coal which release a lot of carbon into the atmosphere which damages.
The advancement in technology has both positive and negative effects and cannot be the solution for solving all the major environmental problems as most of the imbalance in nature is created due to advancements in technology, but it also provides alternate ways to reduce the impact in the environment.
- An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 73
- Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the ocean and may lead to a Tsunami. Although advancement in technology causes an imb...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e in nature it can provide solutions to some of the important problems that we face today. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16287878788 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00842242491 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2448554046 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119289746769 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535759641671 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693281868667 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956343608408 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504933270844 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.