In the modern era, free Health care is one of the basic needs on which a country's overall development depends on. This essay aims to discuss why it is necessary for all countries to have health care systems for free of cost to treat most of the common illnesses, if not all of them.
Firstly, in developing countries where majority of the people are under privileged, it is very common for people dying with minor illnesses like Flu. In such countries, poor people often take advice from unqualified people like their local chemist and use Antibiotics which could be fatal. For example, in third world countries like India and Bangladesh, every year millions of people die due to minor illnesses like The Flu or Sunstroke. Many studies have proven that most of these people are often financially under privileged.
Secondly, most people argue that free health care is not feasible financially and logistically as it can often get quite expensive to provide adequate treatment for complex illnesses, like cancer in particular due to the requirement of advanced technology. It is important to note that free health care is a basic right which all the citizens should be entitled to avail. In countries like Canada, the governments have devised long term plans to collect more money in the form of taxes and are aiming to provide free health care to all for all of the common illnesses. In addition to that, they are investing in scientific research and development in the process of making the advanced technology cheaper which would allow the implementation of free health systems.
To conclude, providing free health services should be the utmost priority for all the countries because there is no meaning for all the development and advancement in technology if the people are not healthy. The responsibility of the lives of their citizens fall upon the governments and they should device methods to balance all the aspects involved in health care system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... to provide free health care to all for all of the common illnesses. In addition to that, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third, for example, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99388379205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70564269434 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507645259939 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8066835292 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184083156757 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767125137056 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490749834168 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125175639885 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527972506009 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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