Dear Sir,
This is regarding the advertisement posted for volunteers for the event raising charity for blind kids in The Times of India dated January 10th.
As a project manager in a reputed firm in Hyderabad, I strongly believe that my organizational skills would be useful for the upcoming the event. Since, I was planning to take my annual vacation from work from January 15th till the end of the month, it would be perfect for me to join the team as I can devote my full time to it. As per my company’s interests, I have successfully organized multiple fund raisers as part of Corporate Social Responsibility(CSR) for various Non Profit Organizations across the city.
It came to my notice that the venue is yet to be decided. My company would be glad to provide the auditorium at the campus which can host up to 500 guests. It would be an ideal location as it is very close to the airport and would also attract the company’s frequent donors who are very generous. In addition to that, many of my colleagues would be interested to join hands for help on the day of the venue. I firmly believe that hosting it there would take the event to the next level.
Looking forward to a positive reply
Yours sincerely,
Chan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... me to join the team as I can devote my full time to it. As per my company’s interests, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59545454545 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72428245159 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9751042244 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847787371894 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360191169981 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381650118061 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495416787302 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039697109541 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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