Dear Sir,
I have recently come across the proposal by the Hyderabad Airport Development Authority (HADA) for the new International Airport at Himayatsagar in a public exhibition held at Parade Grounds a week ago. I am writing this to inform you about the hazards of construction at the location.
Osmansagar lake which has been built by the Nizam’s 100 years ago as part of the city’s Storm water management system lies right next to the outer periphery of the proposed Airport design. A majority of the site area falls in the overflow zone of the lake. When inquired further about the lake’s future, I understood from the officials at the exhibition the lake is being demolished to make way for construction since it is not being used as Storm water drain anymore. However, since the lake is located adjacent to a wildlife sanctuary, it has significantly improved the eco system of the region and hence attracts thousands of migratory birds each year. Building an Airport in the region would completely destroy the flourishing wildlife.
As a part of thesis during my Bachelor’s degree in Architecture, I have done intense research for the ideal location for an International Airport for the city. Consequently, I have reached a conclusion regarding the ideal location for an airport for the city which is Samshabad. It is mostly barren land and as it falls on the National Highway connecting Hyderabad to Bengaluru, it is an ideal location for an Airport. I would give me immense joy to share my research regarding the same, if needed.
Looking forward for a positive reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Chan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00743494424 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91863942179 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3458619395 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910563706459 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380735766608 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425589600483 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499527644126 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054412743214 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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