Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, the death of several languages is an important problem that generated a great deal of heated debate and has now become even more controversial. Although there are many people believe that fewer languages make the global communication easier, I totally do not agree with this opinion.
At the outset, there are a myriad of reasons why the proponents maintain that speaking less language could make communication easier, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that people just need to know fewer language to be able to communicate all over the word. An instance illustrates this action is the fact that Singapore where people from various countries live together but since English is now become very popular there so residences just need to talk and understand English to communicate.
However, this shouldn’t be the reason to let a language dies. First, it was a long period to form and to develop a language. In fact, language go along with the development of a society, during this period, people use language to communicate with each other to conquer the nature and build up the community, all of this need a longtime to create a language. Secondly, each language contains its own culture which contributes to the diversity cultures of the world. It could be a great deal of regret to lose any language.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, I’m inclined to believe that language is a big heritage that every country to conserve. Since some of them are now in danger, it is strongly required effectives solutions to save languages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...is opinion. At the outset, there are a myriad of reasons why the proponents maintain ...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...ewer language to be able to communicate all over the word. An instance illustrates this action is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04182509506 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84918519319 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4554707319 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307209726385 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107607510071 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901493410261 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176315092162 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818108532276 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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