Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many languages are on the verge of extinction annually.It is believed as a positive change by some as they opine that having few languages will be beneficial to the whole world. I totally disagree with this fact as I am Indian and I am aware of the different culture of different regions and its significance to the local people. This essay will discuss the importance of the language in respect to one’s culture and society secondly , the difficulty in implementing few languages as a compulsory medium of communication , followed by a reasoned conclusion.
A language is not only spoken words but it also reflects one’s culture and traditions. It is a gift provided to generations from the ancestors that needs to be preserved and not killed. For instance, Sanskrit language is known as mother of all languages is renowned in India and many languages have been developed from it. Holy books and ancient history were written in this language. Despite this, English has become an important language for Indian people , as many feel it makes life easier to communicate with the world.
Communicating by using only few languages, such as English and Hindi, you distinguish yourself from others. Majority of the people in the world are still trying to learn English since years, yet they are unsuccessful in doing so. Countries like China and Korea are trying hard to grasp English and communicate in their business , but still they haven’t learned fully. However , English is a most commonly used language for business across the world and have encouraged more and more countries to adopt it to overcome the competitive environment.
In conclusion , although few commonly used languages help to make life simpler, but this should not be at the stake of country’s culture and values to get extinct.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09060402685 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91355835395 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9948393766 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270463317733 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935662492933 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069594978992 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162766736517 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698248008879 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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