In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many countries in recent years have seen an increase in the crime rate. The main cause of this change is due to ever increasing population. This essay will discuss the prime reason of misconduct of rules and regulations and the possible measures to control them.
Effect of rising dwellers in a region is the main reason for the spread of malpractices. It is correctly said that, “An empty mind is a devil’s workshop “. Due to huge number of people without proper job opportunities end up going on a wrong path because they also need to earn a living. Another reason is there is a huge cultural difference which leads to a major cause such as terrorism . For instance , Hindu- Muslim riots in India are known for ages , Its due to the caste system and difference in beliefs they outburst at each other and ultimately that leads to increase in the crime rate, it’s a race of proving their community as the strongest. One more such example of a recent attack that took place in Cananda’s Indian restaurant proves that , if there are cultural differences and doors are open to all, the local communities may be against this idea of the government and may end up performing such crime.
To handle these kinds of situations the government should increase security of the country and also implement strict rules than before. Citizens should be afraid of the consequences that they might have to face in case of performing these illegal activities. Creation of more jobs and conducting training programmes for the youth can be looked into as the control measures towards the growing crime rate.
To conclude , it is clear that increasing population and cultural differences are the major cause of rise in the crime rate and to control them stringent rules and regulation can be followed along with job creation and training programmmes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94568690096 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73696933616 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.890102002 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134856663238 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512344983083 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402219476503 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879364271134 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248550952647 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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