Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Indubitably, language gives an identity to a society without human evolution for exchanging ideas and information. It is often argued that the world becomes easy for exchanging information by humans if fewer languages will be existing in all parts of continents. And, I partially agree with this given notion because all the languages have some importance and identity to a society without human evolution.
Apparently, various factors make a section of society advocate that the world will become a better place by having a small number of languages and have two prime reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost is the fact that the individuals from other nations will build relationships among themselves by having spoken of common languages. For instance, a plentiful number of Asians are going to another side of the world in different countries like Germany, the USA, and Canada to complete their tertiary education or finding new opportunities for work and their future endeavors. This kind of relationship only happens because of common languages spoken in between counties. Those languages are English, French, and German which are highly spoken in countries like the USA, Germany, and Canada. Secondly, the economy of the nation rises up with different kinds of opportunities by doing international business such as trading and exchanging of commodities which happens too because of common languages spoken by individuals.
On the other hand, some believe that every language has its importance to society. Chiefly because it represents the identity of a people coming from different religions and communities which are in the small proportion in the world. Additionally, it is crucial to keep every language alive to know the history of humans and their practices which might be benefit the modern world. For instance, In India, Sanskrit is the old language that was spoken by every Indian in the early decades but now only a few Indians speak nowadays. However, it is important to learn Sanskrit because of the old Ayurvedic books written by Vedics in those early decades are helping people to get themselves treated with the formulation of Ayurvedic medicines written in the Sanskrit language.
To conclude, there is no doubt that world will become a better place by speaking few or common languages among humans, but it is crucial to keep every language because of its importance and its benefits to the modern society. Like I said above, I partially concur to the given notion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ld will become a better place by having a small number of languages and have two prime reasons to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2004950495 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79905188445 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487623762376 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8466256369 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.3125 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281716954325 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970842732036 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648011736411 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177601573231 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334535946013 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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