One school of thought holds that the elderly were cheerful and robust as they were physically active and used to spend a lot of time with their loved ones, while both their mental and physical health have been on the wane nowadays. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving factors behind this negative tendency before outlining several viable solutions that should be adopted to tackle it.
There are two primary reasons as to why senior citizens not solely suffer from medical issues but also feel more lonely. First and foremost, there is a huge lack of open spaces in modern life. This is because these days people focus on extending the buildings while narrowing public areas such as parks or recreational areas which could cause the elder generation to tend to spend most of their time at home either watching television or reading books. Therefore, they are very likely to suffer from health problems such as cardiovascular or high blood pressure, due to increased secondary time. Another underlying motive is in modern society, most people are occupied with their jobs.
To be more specific, hectic work schedules are depriving people of the time spent with family which act as a precursor to spending increasingly less family time with the elderly.
To combat this worrying issue, the following essential steps should be taken. The first measure is that state officials should allocate government funding for building recreational structures such as park which has a wide range of shaded-giving trees. Older residents would be able to enjoy going for a stroll in this park, and this also could help them to communicate with each other and lead to bestowing enormous benefits upon on healthy life. Another remedy is campaigns that raise public awareness about serious repercussions, especially leading to a deterioration in elderly’mental health should be intensified. Once the offspring is aware of the adverse consequences of insufficient time for the family, they would be nudged toward spending more time for the family.
In conclusion, there are several underlying motives to blame for this negative development, and it is crucial that the aforementioned measures be implemented to deal with this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...be implemented to deal with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19944598338 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73244232344 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603878116343 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.692407384 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.071428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217613583952 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693946378368 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512689450128 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123260973147 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504187686218 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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