Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the
environment. What can government do to address these problems?
What can individual people do?
In modern times, air pollution has enjoyed increasing popularity in recent
years, so we need to act responsibly to protect the environment and
reduce the damage that we are doing to the Earth.
It is possibly said that damaging the environmet can stem from several
reasons, One of the main cause is that the combustion of fossil fuels that
drives the industrial process. Another reason cause of air pollution is
common forms of transportation like automobiles, planes and ships
which generally use combustion to harness energy from fossil fue. This
can lead to more adverse effect of pollution is on human’s health.
Several measures could be taken to alleviate the aforementioned problem. The first solution is we should utilize alternative energy sources, this is because fossil fuel supply is running out while the demand for energy is increasing rapidly. Therefore, renewable energy such as solar energy, wind energy and water power with much lower impacts on the
environment is necessary. Another feasible measure is that government
should introduce and enact some laws which raise public awareness, use
recycled paper to help save trees
In conclusion, people should responsibly protect the environment, the
government enacts to the steps to create public awareness. Every
individual should be involved in helping to reduce and control pollution
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52112676056 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78997300932 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3187814482 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150748200641 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543443184984 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036519171002 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479895625916 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04918142968 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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