Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Extreme sports are becoming increasingly popular sport lovers these days, and some people argue that it must be prohibited at all costs. I completely refute this notion that these sports are too dangerous, and therefore I believe that it should not be banned.
In my opinion, these activities are not as life threatening as people may think. In fact, every sport has some major element of risk involved, and to counter it, rules and regulations are constantly revised to improve one’s experience. To minimize risk, partaking in some activities requires medical fitness and mandatory training. For instance, skydiving or parachuting requires signing up lessons from registered clubs and amateurs are accompanied by experienced professionals for a positive experience. With effective regulations and training, sports are an easy going leisure activity.
While I support the legislations to make these activities safe, I believe that it is wrongful and almost impossible to ban extreme sports. people do not need the advice of the authorities about what to do in their leisure time, as long as people understand the risks of performing certain activities. Further, banning extreme sports would be a major hiccup for the administration, since the police cannot be omnipresent. For example, if an adventure seeker partakes in base-jumping or parachuting; it might be performed at a remote location beyond the reach of the action forces. so, enforcing a ban on extreme sports is unjustified and impracticable.
In conclusion, such sports are not so dangerous if regulations are well followed. Banning it is entirely preposterous as long as risks are well understood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44061302682 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12752591652 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5531364327 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192556029037 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642999982395 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587322122954 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115938340156 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576850782694 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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