Famous people sometimes give their opinion on the public topic. Is this a good thing? Explain to what extent you agree or disagree?
People from different professions gets famous because of the new era of publicity and media. These could include the movie stars, singers, politicians and sports stars. Sometimes they take advantage of their popularity to promote values in the community.
Famous people-like film stars, singers, cricketers live an illusionary life with little contact with the ground realities of this world. Hence, sometimes they act like “A knight in shining armor” and give their valuable suggestion about how to save the world. Therefore, I think it is completely out of context and should be avoided at all cost. Firstly, they earn an enormous amount of money and live an elite life far from the ordinary people. Therefore, when they pinpoint some issue, they give unreal solution. For example, Mishaal Khan one of best-known film star, suggest how every woman should work round the clock in her profession, which resulted in a huge outcry from the general public, because not everyone can afford to pay for the maids to do the house work and babysit. Ordinary female has to handle all chores of the house, in addition to taking care of their children. Secondly, some celebrities give statements, which are totally contradictory to what they do themselves. For Instance, they raise the slogan against rape, while they wear negligible clothes and instill low moral values in the society, or they talk against the dowry while spending millions on their own weddings.
On the other hands, some people who get hype of fame are doctors, lawyers, politicians. These meet with people relating to every walk of life on a daily basis. Mostly, who are in dire need of help and right now at the lowest level of their life with depression and anxiety, hence, they have firsthand experience of people’s life. When they suggest some things for the betterment of society, it should be considered and tried to be implemented by all means. For example, Dr. Shireen is one of children specialist, if she gives her opinion about children vaccination and hygienic issues, it should be promoted.
In conclusion, various professions have different level of credibility against them, if they promote health, moral values and law, we should completely respect it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...hich resulted in a huge outcry from the general public, because not everyone can afford to pay...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...and anxiety, hence, they have firsthand experience of people's life. When they sugges...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14441416894 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63845776202 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588555858311 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7979514824 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136844309394 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444250834719 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357717774735 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794779162889 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474250384605 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.