In recent times, fast food has been growing tremendously worldwide and their popularity seems to be increasing. Fast food chains are expanding rapidly, and coming out with innovative and fusion food to suit the taste buds of the local people. Although, some people may find this trend appealing and positive, there are many who don't agree due to it's detrimental effects on health. I believe people should not be addicted to fast food and need to ask themselves how much is too much!
Since, junk food is readily available almost everywhere, people prefer to indulge in them rather than opting for a healthy option. However, they fail to realize that the nutritional value in fast food is very low and you just keep on accumulating too much salt, sugar and trans saturated fats in your body. According to a survey conducted by the guardian, majority of the people who suffer from obesity is a result of consuming large amounts of fast food. In addition, these foods are loaded with all unhealthy items that make them very tasty thus making you over eat.
While, consuming fast food in small quantities may not prove to be harmful people should strive to maintain a healthy lifestyle. It's advisable to have a hearty meal at home and carry some healthy snacks or fruits when out in order to avoid eating unhealthy. For instance, while going for a picnic it is better carry homemade sandwiches rather than having a hot dog from the vendor. While it's okay to occasionally cheat on your diet, it should not be made a habit.
To summarize, before eating something it is better to ask yourself is this healthy or am I just consuming empty calories? Moreover, healthy should be given priority rather than availability and efforts should be made to eat clean. Rather than just eating to satisfy your hunger, people should eat eat to nourish their body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ealing and positive, there are many who dont agree due to its detrimental effects on...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...very tasty thus making you over eat. While, consuming fast food in small quantitie...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: IT_IS[8]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...having a hot dog from the vendor. While its okay to occasionally cheat on your diet...
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Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: eat
...g to satisfy your hunger, people should eat eat to nourish their body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80564263323 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46787120059 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4193966037 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148352553607 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547957530552 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305302575554 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921329882359 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454757242889 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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