You recently returned by plane from an overseas trip. When you reached home, you realised you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline.
In your letter:
say when and where you lost your hand luggage
describe the bag and its contents
suggest the action you would like the airline to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to an urgent issue. I was on the 12 a.m. flight from Mumbai-India to Singapore (Airbus A360) and had one check-in luggage and one hand luggage. Since the flight landed early morning, I was drowsy and as a result only collected my check-in bag. Once I reached home I realized that I had completely forgotten my hand luggage in the overhead bin above my seat. My seat number is F35.
Let me explain in detail. First, it is a black Puma bag with my name and phone number written on the tag in the front. Secondly, it contains some souvenirs, which not be high in monetary value but very important to me as I got them specially for my friends and family. In addition, certain important documents like my work visa and drivers license were also in the bag and I need them immediately.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you could check with the staff if they found a missing bag. please feel free to contact me at 9357689532 if you need any information. Moreover I have attached a copy of my ticket as well as sent a copy of this letter tot the airport.
Looking forward to your co-operation.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... result only collected my check-in bag. Once I reached home I realized that I had co...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
... the staff if they found a missing bag. please feel free to contact me at 9357689532 i...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...9357689532 if you need any information. Moreover I have attached a copy of my ticket as ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50917431193 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57783880893 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3405461506 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2142857143 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195215684783 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582459716899 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484123009744 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999177655888 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557110236159 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.