In a modern lifestyle eating junk food has rising tremendously in people especially children and adults. While its possible to clam that fast food quick, convenient in expensive to feed our stomach. In the other side junk food is very much harmful for our health. That’s why I decided to explain my both point of views here.
There are myriad reasons why junk food is disadvantageous for people. One of them is lack of nutrition junk food have not any nutrition which is needed for our body, so it is useless for body need various kinds of dangerous diseases like obesity, teeth damage, diabetes etc eating junk food. In example, one third of people is USA are suffering obesity because of junk food. They have to spend lot of money for treatment even it can be reason of death also. Nowadays probing generating eating outside especially junk food leaving their lunch or dinner at home. It can be reason of family problems as we know food table is the traditional melting place of family.
On the flip side, some people are thinking that junk food are less expensive than others and it also quick and easily everywhere. In additional is not killing time for cooking those is quite taste. So, junk food is the best food to feed our stomach in our busy life.
In conclusion, I want to tell that health is wealth, so we should not compromise with it. As we can not stop buying or selling of junk food, but we should be aware of the negative sides of it because is affecting our health, money, society as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...reatment even it can be reason of death also. Nowadays probing generating eating out...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tasted'.
Suggestion: tasted
...killing time for cooking those is quite taste. So, junk food is the best food to feed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59191176471 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40967617155 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0508627599 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127744705331 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490736992083 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047843539426 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884651463778 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538949080471 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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