Our body metabolism depends upon the food we eat and exercise. Urban life demands fast solutions which inevitably brings us to the point, fast food and menace it poses on our health. Certainly, our generation is more addicted to this lifestyle like never before. Fast food is coined to term all items which are pre cooked or ready to eat which are less nutritious than regular food. I am on same grounds to those who argue that such choices have negative effects on our health. Let me explain about various reason for why youth attracted to these hazardous foods and threats we should be aware of.
Generally, fast foods are heavy in carbohydrates and spices making meals tastier for which children get lured to the fast food outlets. On the other hand, cheap prices and convenient delivery makes it even more attractive for those who want to get quick bite. Primary constituent of ready to eat packs is Mono Sodium glutamate which enhances craving in us for more. According to survey conducted by Central Food Research Institute kids are easy target for fast food chains and 35% adults plan constant visit to them as part of their life choice. Another frightening issue is they are replacing traditional food patterns and thus making us more vulnerable. According to professor Nicholson of Bradford university, in near future, houses are planned without kitchens in them as our food supply is outsourced.
On an average, a person diet should consist proteins, fibre, minerals and fats with varying proportions. However, processed food contains only small ratio or sometimes absent of any of these ingredients which results in malnutrition’s. Chemicals used for preservation while manufacturing rises concern of long-term effects on over body. Already, malnourishment is degrading our immune system and attack of preservatives weakens vital organs. All India Institute of Medical Sciences revealed that more than 45% kidney failure caused by artificial colours used for attracting customers. In several occasions parents also prefer to such food items thinking them as risk free and easy to cook.
Government regulations on commercial food industry should be reviewed and necessary precautions to be implemented for public welfare. In conclusion we can say that one should be critical on food choices they make as our body is made by what we eat. Disadvantages outweigh meager benefits of junk food and for healthy body and mind we should learn to say 'No' to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...ns only small ratio or sometimes absent of any of these ingredients which results in maln...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12623762376 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74819254216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626237623762 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3117507492 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.619047619 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2380952381 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14496253615 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438137344046 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378147157312 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868637136996 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377532729178 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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