Steep rise in abortions in recent days, once again spurred up the debate about their moral and legality . The issue is controversial because of ethical and health concerns associated with it. Conservative view is that termination of pregnancy is not only immoral but also have deep effect on women's health. On contrary, liberal thinkers assert that it's completely legal as long as the decision is made for women's welfare and with consent. With all due respect to former notion, I support later argument as laws relating to abortion safeguard women's rights and as well control population. In this essay we will discuss both views and support my argument with relevant examples.
Usual reasons for feticide are genetical defect in fetus, fatality to mother, unwanted pregnancy. However, in countries like India, female foeticide is common making the issue more complicated. In this context, no amount of sociological reasons can support abortion. Legalising medical help in these circumstance makes the situation even worse. To the other end of spectrum, girls who get pregnant at tender age because of child marriage can terminate conception on grounds of health and responsibility. Additionally, family planning can be better implemented when laws regulating abortion are supportive. Nevertheless, the intention behind such acts should be crystal clear and in consensus with women bearing child.
Further, elder generation have instilled these ideas that abortion is bad omen which perpetuated like a social taboo. These beliefs becomes even stronger when they are blended with religious sentiments. Other factors liberals point out are, abortion is harmful to women's womb and reduces chances of future pregnancy. Similarly, they are also afraid of judgmental attitude of society which in their perception even more important than health. All these pointers makes traditionalists to be against abortions. Whereas, these reasons cannot outweigh the necessity of protecting life of women.
From above elaborative discussion we can safely conclude the topic that in sensitive issues like pregnancy and abortion prior importance should be given to parents as they have more problems to face than general public. Surely, it's not a easy decision but legalising abortions with limitations can help conserving women's rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55337078652 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80911464299 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8169006037 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199626050599 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528467450248 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395581364905 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118663278705 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253709227096 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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