Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the centre.
I have only recently become a member, having seen your advertisements in the local newspaper. These advertisements claimed that you have the most modern equipment and personal training sessions for all new members. However, in the two weeks I have been attending your facility, it has become apparent that the machines are far from up to date and I am still waiting for an appointment with the personal trainer.
At this point I am asking you to either make a full refund of all the fees I have paid up to this point or to take immediate action to reflect the facilities you claimed to have in your advertisement. This would mean new equipment would need to be purchased and personal trainer sessions to be organised without delay.
However, I would like to add that I have always found your staff courteous and helpful, even if they are a little overworked.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
P. Jackson
- some people think that school should teach students to understand about right wrong and good behaviour instead of this being only parents responsibility do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Education from preschool through university should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of thefollowing topic Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common disea 89
- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82658959538 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80909393233 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6452120146 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212528887299 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923858335332 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481708514755 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115165188003 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385754542755 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.