It is often argued that the consumption of just food has grown significantly during recent times and youngsters adore eating fast food. I could not agree more to this statement. The rationale of this essay is to include the factors that influence people to eat junk food and deterimental repercussions of this phenomenon.
To commence with, consumption of fast food is pacing up its speed. Young generation love eating fast food as they find these foods scrumptious. Trend of international foods like pizza, burger, salads, noodles has increased in India and is commonly available. Also known as street food, people find these foods lip smacking as makers put many spices and condiments to enhance its flavour and deep frying is done to improve its quality. Moreover, enchanting advertisements abet kids to consume these foods. I believe that eating junk food once in a while does not cause any damage to health however, overeating these foods definitely lead to harmful implications. For instance, according to recent research revealed by Indian medical institute almost 60% of heart failures have been reported in youngsters.
The main reason behind this abrupt rise in heart issues is unhealthy eating habits and over consumption of unhygienic foods. It is the sole duty of parents to guide children and make them aware about the nutritional value of various foods. Additionally parents should also discuss negative consequences of consuming convenience foods. However, several changes are seen in personality traits of many kids as they have started becoming lethargic and corpulent.
In conclusion, having discussed this topic in detail, i am inclined to believe that enchanting advertisements and poor parenting are the major culprit behind this worrisome issue. It is indubitably a disturbing trend as it can make
children obese, sluggish and reckless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37074829932 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88768298749 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6655834529 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141990930895 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478070968751 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452598204887 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692275201599 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654020566196 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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