Modern world is totally equipped with machines and people these days are dependent on machines for their needs and all household chores. Whereas doing work with hand needs a lot of hardwork and time. I prefer to do things by hands. This essay tends to justify my viewpoint with the help of certain examples.
To commence with, there are different schools of thought regarding man made and machine made products. People of 21st century rely on machine made products as they think these products are made within no time and that time can be utilized to do various other household activities. Moreover when we are in a hurry, we find these new century tools more convinient and handy. For instance, making food in microwave oven saves a lot of time and cooking food in oxyfryers is healthy and scrumptious. Additionally, many different appliances are used in our day to day life like coffee maker, bread toasters, breakfast maker which has made youngsters believe that every work can be done using machines.
Besides, another reason for using machines are that most of the people remain busy for the better part of the day, they reach home late at night and they do not have time to cook food so they prefer to eat food cooked in kitchen appliances. Even though, food is cooked within seconds but it certainly has many harmful implications on our health. Ultraviolet rays are released when we use microwaves which directly or indirectly affects our health. Moreover, usage of electronic appliances also shoots up the electricity bill. My first preference is to make eatables with hand and it gives me inner satisfaction also that the food is made under hygeinic conditions and is healthy.
Having discussed this essay in detail, i am inclined to believe that modern world pivots on machines and appliances and the major reason behind this scenario is that people have become lethargic and they have shortage of time. Curbing this trend will definitely lead to healthy life
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- Some products can be made quickly by a machine Other items take a long time to be made by hand As a buyer which do you prefer and why Give specific details and examples in your answer 78
- Today more people are shopping online than ever before Why do people choose to shop in this way Are there disadvantages to shopping online Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 61
- Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93113772455 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51397364065 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0712792751 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220918942627 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682321369946 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789809101797 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121737268277 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800074869265 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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