Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In twenty first century, obesity is one of the major issue society is facing. A part of community believes that schools and colleges should make sports obligatory to get a control over overweight problem. I strongly support this statement that sports should be made compulsory course and in this essay I will provide the benefits of making games essential.
Universities and families are two most important factors who teach kids what is beneficial for them. schools should make students aware of overweight problems and should educate them that being active can be one of the solution to this illness. compulsion of sports like soccer, volly-ball, baskateball etc can help children making their body flexible and healthy. studies have proven that gaining weight problems begin at early age of life. making kids active at this age can help them keeping themselves from such decease. IN addition to this, necessiating sports can help students in many ways.
Firstly, kids can develop interest towards certain game and might develop their career in that particular sport. Secondly, active body helps human to focus on their study which in turn can be helpful in scoring higher grades. Thirdly, there are theories which suggests that hobbies develop in childhood. Obligating activities at this age will help kids to get habitual with games and they will continue those games as a hobby even when they are out of college.
In conclusion, compulsing sports by education institutes will not only benefit students with solving obesity problems but also help them to develop hobby, to choose career path and to keep body active.
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- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some people think that dangerous spots should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Schools
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Suggestion: Compulsion
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Suggestion: Studies
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Suggestion: Making
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to keep' or 'keep'.
Suggestion: to keep; keep
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...o help them to develop hobby, to choose career path and to keep body active.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17424242424 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47993555339 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7242899099 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992806416489 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376846825283 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531695642753 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064349181487 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414749102552 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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