Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
In today's world, people are moving towards an extra curricular activities, in particular young generation. This is one of the best thing I believe to make a time for self as an individual from the busy schedule. It has indeed positive impact on the society, a hobby can become a profession in some cases.
With the growth of digitalisation and technology, the world has become a single entity. The standard of living has gone high and to fulfill demands, people have become more and more workoholic.This in result has made a human more mechanical. There is no specific schedule. In such situation, if one has developed any kind of particular interest in an activity, then it is indeed relaxing for mind and body.
For example, Doctor's job is the most difficult one and demands utmost attention and time. To relieve their stress, now a days doctors have also begun to develope a hobbies like singing and music. Many of them are good singers. This not only reduce their stress levels, but make them feel special.
Although, there are many workers who have to work for long to earn an extra wages besides their daily,weekly or monthly income. So they are not able to spend time with their families, relatives and friends. These workaholics have to sacrifice their hobbies like gardening, singing, music, art,dance etc.
Moreover, this results in poor health and lifestyle. Furthermore, now,today's young generation are living under a constant pressure of performing well from the academics point of view. This could affect a child's performance in his personal well-being and behaviour in general.
In conclusion, giving an importance to a hobby along with regular work has many advantages. It relieves stress, boosts confidence, satisfaction of doing something new and an overall benefit to the company and community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
... are moving towards an extra curricular activities, in particular young generation. This i...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...le have become more and more workoholic.This in result has made a human more mechani...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...tion and time. To relieve their stress, now a days doctors have also begun to develope a h...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hobby' or simply 'hobbies'?
Suggestion: a hobby; hobbies
...ays doctors have also begun to develope a hobbies like singing and music. Many of them ar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , weekly
... earn an extra wages besides their daily,weekly or monthly income. So they are not able...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dance
...bies like gardening, singing, music, art,dance etc. Moreover, this results in poo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ardening, singing, music, art,dance etc. Moreover, this results in poor health an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , todays
...r health and lifestyle. Furthermore, now,todays young generation are living under a con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11705685619 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81553709546 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.263029106 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5263157895 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125468453001 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367568115686 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410368350026 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622257316989 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416489792344 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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