In the today’s dynamically developing world strolling as a healthy exercise has become less and less popular in society. There seem to be two main causes and a variety of realistic solutions to low walking activity in society, which I will examine further.
Probably the main reason behind the issue at hand of low people activity outside is a lack of green area and air pollution. The former happened because of poor zoning plans in a town. As a result, people do not have an opportunity to go for a walk close to their house. The latter is a result of car and industry emission in a town. Not only has it become uncomfortable walking along roads, but it also unhealthy to breathe because of the smoke. Thus it is clear that a poor zoning plan and an excessive amount of pollutants in the air are a serious cause in this question.
Turning to possible solutions, perhaps the immediate step would be to raise government awareness of this problem. As long as authorities give permission for constructing residential areas, without any close located parks for leisure time, the number of people who do not walk will be dramatically increased. Secondly, to encourage the use of electric cars is a possible solution to reduce air emission. Therefore, strict government control of the array of parks and the level of air emission in a town is a possible solution to increase the number of people walking outside.
Finally, as the above shows, air emission and lack of places for walking are the major causes of weak popularity of outside exercising in society. To create a positive atmosphere for this activity, governments should pay more attention in order to increase the number of green areas in a city and pursued people to use more pollution-free cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ealthy to breathe because of the smoke. Thus it is clear that a poor zoning plan and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84158415842 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80223480555 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1160627036 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144880391255 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480519730652 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462933058395 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081531903163 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319246406993 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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