Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is incredibly common for eminent people from entertainment industry and other celebrities to give comments on general problems that are related to public interests. Although this phenomenon is marginally in relation to their professional lives, this is a positive development because it adds a new perspective to the ongoing concern and expediting things up to take corrective measures.
To begin with, the pervasiveness of the internet has enabled people from all over the world to express their opinions on current affairs. Taking advantages of hot platforms such as Twitter, Facebook and Instagram, famous people are posting their viewpoints online. The thoughs of the celebrities increases the different opinions of people. Some may support a act and some may be against it. Having disparate feedbacks on problems creates corresponds that vary in nature. The more the number of famous people commenting, the better people can relate to the problem.
Furthermore, since such people have massive amount of influence on fan following, the governments take their words seriously and take effective measure accordingly. This leads to speeding things up. For instance, a simple twitt from Bill Gates helped immensely in favor of the ‘Black Lives Matter’ campaign. The U.S. government was compelled to take necessary action to make matter less worse. Thus, renowned people help by showing their interest in matters.
To conclude, despite the fact that there is no similarity in professional field and public matters, well-know people still post their views on public matters. This trend result in has many upsides such as a fresh viewpoint on the topic and speeding process to implement precautionary measures.
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school Write a letter to one of your old teacher asking for a reference In your letter say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job sug 87
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree 73
- You play a team sport with some friends Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn t able to play with you over the the weekend You decide to write to him at the hospital telling him about the match Write a letter to your friend In your lette 73
- Nowadays a lot of offices employ open space designs instead of separate rooms for work Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Nowadays celebrities are mainly famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to young people To what extent do you agree and disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'supports'.
Suggestion: supports
... different opinions of people. Some may support a act and some may be against it. Havin...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nt opinions of people. Some may support a act and some may be against it. Having ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the number of famous people commenting, the better people can relate to the prob...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less bad', 'less ill'?
Suggestion: less bad; less ill
...to take necessary action to make matter less worse. Thus, renowned people help by showing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45692883895 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.872236759 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6550769475 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208513637194 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605735084448 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427197615178 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124143246498 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233009098421 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.