Nowadays, film stars and celebrities tend to share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. This development has taken effect in this 21st century due to the rapid increase of technology in our world today. Social media has made a huge contribution to society by making it possible for a celebrity to share their views to their followers and make an impact with it.
First, I would say that it is a positive development for the human race. The world can effectively share a view through social media and we as a people can collectively decide on which actions to take when it matters. During the days of no technology, there were limits to how effective an individual’s opinion can be, but now it is a different ball game.
The social media has made the celebrities so powerful, because of the followers advantage they posses. Apps like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram have made it possible for them to air their opinions wether it concerns them or not and would still be heard. There has never been a time in history where you can share an opinion and get such huge real time feedback from people.
For example, the End SARS campaign that happened in Nigeria showed how social media can influence issues on ground. Tweets from celebs such as the likes of Wizkid, Davido, Psquare etc proved to be a force to reckon with. Our mobile phones once connected to the internet gives us access to every online information we need. Although, they are disadvantages to this but just a few. On one hand, technology has made it possible for under age kids with lack of parental care to access some sites that don’t suit their age bracket.
In conclusion, the development technology brought has made our world a better place. We look forward to more positive developments of this nature.
- Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Internet contains a lot of information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- some people say government should subsidised the fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper Some other say it should be tax to unhealthy food discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence In your letter Tell your manager what event it was Say how important the event was State the reasons for your absence 73
- Physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76025236593 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58685080979 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9735270029 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311624678006 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965309340188 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148751006152 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168753521069 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172846130931 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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