In this modern era, every individual wants to become popular and earn collosal amount of money, most of the youngsters are searching for various opportunities to earn fame and money. Bollywood stars and singers are very popular, affluent and enjoy expensive lifestyle, expend money on opulent items. Despite that, many celebrities lead depressed life. I could not agree more with this standpoint.
To commence with, celebrities are well liked and earn immense amount of money as these famous people endorse many products and do films on large scale. Moroever, these famous personalities can travel whereever they want, expend money on luxurious cars and household products. Besides being cash rich many of the film stars and music celebrities lead unhappy and depressed life as all days of life are not the same. There are many many times when a famous star does not get work opportunities for long and it becomes difficult to maintain balance of their well off life. It is often said money is important but money cannot buy happiness. For instance- About 75% of film stars live alone or they are too busy in their hectic schedule, they forget to meet their near and dear ones in sake of earning money.
Furthermore, media also interferes in their life, they often ask them questions about their personal life and make them uncomfortable in front of everyone. In addition to, media often spread fake rumours about celebrities which makes their condition more miserable and make them excruciating. Besides that, bollywood stars are facing many of the unpleasant events as they are in limelight and are always unsafe, they pay huge price for being famous. Many celebrities undergo suicidal attempts for being under depression for long.For instance- 90% of famous personalities get threats and warnings from underground world so they are always on the danger zone and these things affect their psychological health.
In conclusion, having discussed this topic in detail, I believe that even though popular stars earn enormous amount of money but many of them lead sad and gloomy life as they are the public’s eye. Certain troublesome events make their life more depressing and they try to take their own life.
- Nowadays communicating with others is faster and easier thanks to technology like email cellular phones and beepers Has this change improved the way people live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings but many of them lead unhappy lives Do you agree To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11570247934 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56799555258 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4912010872 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354190790793 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116807490321 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590357062109 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210382219942 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724397312984 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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