In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation.
In the 21 century everything us evolving at a large-scale including media and computer games. It is always been a sought since few year people trying to validate the content we are watching and playing to check impact on our life. Few people inclined to opine that the movies and computer games are a good entertainment medium and a stress buster but others argue that it harm the society. I also support this thought due to visible health issues and violence encouragement.
To start with there are majority of people support the movies and games full of violence. They think it is a very good medium for stress relief. for instance, there are many games where you can customize the target as your boss and can play o kiss and can take out all your stress.Besides this such games are very catchy and can keep your naughty child busy and refrain from doing new mistakes.
On the other hand there are people including me oppose such games and films. they find these films and games filled with violence can easily harm timekeeping habits which then effect their studies and physical and mental health for example As per a survey there are many student facing problem in focus and got spectacles due to binge-watch of such game series soils up violence attitude in small children mind.
To conclude I think though there violence movies and games are entertaining and stress busters but cam cause our children to spoil if a proper monitoring is not given on their behavior, which can defiantly result into society damage.
- You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say– What is the reason for your leaving?– What do you plan to do?– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it? 73
- In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation. 73
- You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say– What is the reason for your leaving?– What do you plan to do?– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: majorities
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Suggestion: Besides
...o kiss and can take out all your stress.Besides this such games are very catchy and can...
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Suggestion: They
...cluding me oppose such games and films. they find these films and games filled with ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
... a survey there are many student facing problem in focus and got spectacles due to bing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76515151515 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41560962919 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6472475324 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.8 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220564312568 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855504555786 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403359522742 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12433173542 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025524994658 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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