You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say– What is the reason for your leaving?– What do you plan to do?– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

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You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

Submitted by nammu on Wed, 02/06/2019 - 14:54

Hi Nidhi,

I hope this letter find you and your family well. You will be surprised to know that I am leaving the job to pursue masters at the university of Toronto meanwhile I am coming back to Nagpur. I want to meet all my childhood friends including you.

I had planned for mastered since a long but due to other financial obligations, I could not pursue the same hence now I am quitting my job and going to live my dream.

This degree is a three years program, I have already enquired about all the expenses like fees, accommodation and other expenses. I have some savings. Also have a plan to do a part-time job along with my studies.
I am serving 60 days notice period which is mandatory to serve. It will be completed on next week i.e. march 7, 2019. I have booked the ticket for Nagpur. I will start on march 9, 2019. I will be there for two weeks. we all old friends will gathered im my place. we will visit our school and cricket ground as well. I am sure we are going to have a great time.

Looking forward to meet you all.
See you soon.

Bye
Namrata

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Nidhi, I hope this letter find you and your fam...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd other expenses. I have some savings. Also have a plan to do a part-time job along...
^^^^
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...her expenses. I have some savings. Also have a plan to do a part-time job along with...
^^^^
Line 8, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Nagpur. I will start on march 9, 2019. I will be there for two weeks. we all old...
^
Line 8, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...9, 2019. I will be there for two weeks. we all old friends will gathered im my pla...
^^
Line 8, column 241, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'gather'
Suggestion: gather
... for two weeks. we all old friends will gathered im my place. we will visit our school a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... old friends will gathered im my place. we will visit our school and cricket groun...
^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...o have a great time. Looking forward to meet you all. See you soon. Bye Namrata...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27804878049 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32935895622 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3234532069 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.5882352941 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0588235294 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240690461238 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672124125238 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663299508018 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127246055469 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109174839913 0.0580467560999 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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