First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position. To what extent do you agree?

Essay topics:

First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position. To what extent do you agree?

In order to be granted a job, it takes a great deal of effort. Many are convinced that relying on appearance that can impress the interviewer is the most important approach; however, although first impression may give an initial image about the employee’s behaviour, it cannot ensure them a job.
When a candidate first meet their interviewer, they are likely to convey an approximate perception about their attitude through their look. If they wear formally, for example, this can be interpreted as they are serious or committed. Also, when the candidate shows up early, they may be thought of as punctual. This initial impression can have an impact on the decision of whether they are going to be selected for the position or not. Thus, first perception has an impact, but this impact is considered limited.
On the other hand, I believe that holding proper qualifications and deep experience are the most important factors to be employable; regardless of whether the interviewer admires the candidate throughout the interview or not. Personally, before I meet any interviewee, I usually have an idea about who they are and what qualities they hold, thanks to their complete resume and their credentials. For me the meeting’s period is just to make their acquaintance, and to make sure that my prepared perception is still valid. Therefore, concrete expertise is the real compelling factor that can really help secure a job.
To conclude, despite the importance of first impressions on the person who are responsible for employing workers, I see the effect of real work-related experience and competence is the most successful bet.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpetence is the most successful bet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22846441948 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03494218197 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0676688586 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792872447346 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291283056257 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273068574914 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545806447366 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172864725958 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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