First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
In this ever changing materialistic and demanding world, our attitude and behaviour changes according to the person present in front of us. In this competitive age, everybody tries to make an everlasting first impression. Even though we may not agree to it, as a society we have become more judgemental and perceive our thoughts based solely on the person’s appearance. To say first impression is the last impression would perhaps be an exaggeration because one can correct their mistake. However, one will have to make a lot of effort to correct their fault, so why not try your best and create a positive first impression when going for a job interview rather than relying on other factors to get you over the line.
When going for a job interview, the person conducting the interview has numerous candidates in front of him/her all matching the eligibility criteria of that particular vacancy. During the interview, I will be at my most presentable and because of the fact that, I am in dire need of that particular post, I will create the best possible first impression. My appearance and body language will make me stand apart from other candidates. Numerous surveys have shown that people who take care about their looks and try to make a positive first impression are more successful in life. In professional life, a good first impression can open doors to many other possibilities. In the words of Andrew Grant “You never get a second choice to make a first Impression” so one should always try their best.
In the end, I would like to say that even though mistakes can be rectified, but not everyone gets a second chance in life. Life is unpredictable and we should be at our best at the first instance as if you may not be, you will have to work very hard till the next opportunity comes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perform well in interviews as this makes positive impact on the interviewer. Howe...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ail to meet work requirements, then you cant survive in a job for a long time. Also ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... cant survive in a job for a long time. Also your ingenious ideas and proactive appr...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r a healthy work life. Hence, this fact cant be denied that to succeed in job, hard ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01923076923 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84254188689 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9917691528 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255686768496 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104841703665 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601663286803 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172157319066 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025500431273 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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