Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development?
In many parts of the world, fossil fuels play a crucial role in producing energy, and some government leaders have promoted the utilization of new kinds of power. While there is a school of thought that this tendency can have various drawbacks, I believe that it will generate beneficial aspects for the community.
It is worth noticing that using such non-traditional sources of energy can lead to several problems. Firstly, authorities are able to spend a large portion of their national budget building new plants that generate alternative energy sources from wind or solar energy. It also means that other important fields, such as the educational system and the health care system, are likely to lack funds. Furthermore, non-conventional energy sources such as nuclear power could contain a significant amount of radioactive waste, which is highly toxic and harmful. If those substances leak, not only the inhabitants living near them but also the surrounding environment will be affected.
On the other hand, I think that alternative energy sources can have some positive aspects. One of them is that natural, renewable resources can be saved. Another one is that non-conventional sources of energy tend to be environmentally friendly. As they have a good reputation for non-toxic emissions of pollutants, their use can help protect the environment. More job opportunities for locals are created by construction and management firms and plants. To some extent, they make contributions toward increasing income and changing the image of the location.
In conclusion, when it comes to using alternative sources of energy, I hold the opinion that it results in a variety of merits, such as the limitation of emission discharge and the creation of careers; however, its negative effects about leaking toxic substances and a shortage of money for national authorities should be noticed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34448160535 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04443367708 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3419225411 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249348850214 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839322214652 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920466124851 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130907336302 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581612947051 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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