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Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?
A certain school of thought believe that money is the most crucial means of attaining happiness. In my opinion, I think that our happiness is not dependent on our financial status. This essay will discuss the reason for my stance in detail alongside the other factors that can contribute toward happiness.
To begin with, the importance of money in modern life cannot be underrated. However, human desires and wants cannot be generalized as we all have different things that make us happy. For some, it is having a loving wife and children, while there are others who derive joy and fulfillment from volunteering in the community. For example, research has shown that many poor and low income individuals are less likely to commit suicide when compared with richer people, because they are happy with other aspects of their lives asides money.
There are two main factors that can make people happy. Firstly, investing in healthy living and diets. It is generally said that health is wealth because people with different ailments and sicknesses arising from their poor lifestyle cannot be said to be happy. For example, the billionaire CEO of Apple Limited shared his regret about being a chronic smoker which lead to a terminal lung cancer that ultimately cost his life. Secondly, provision of basic amenities by the government can influence our happinesses positively. People living in developed countries are usually heavily tax and indebted, despite their low financial strength, they are happy with their standard of living due to the availability of good roads, hospitals and electricity.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that our happiness as humans is not reliant on our financial capabilities. Being in good health and having access to infrastructure are factors that can encourage happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23024054983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71220026516 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2121720524 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263376891198 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838904077971 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556302756383 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161156141539 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558916928905 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.