Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Solution
In major cities, there are a plethora of building structures with the skyscrappers being the most common. It then begs the question of who should determine what a building should look like. Some have said it is the government's responsibility while others say its should be the owners. In my view, i agree with the former view.
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In major cities, there is a plethora of building structures ,with the tall houses being the most common. It then begs the question of who should determine what a building should look like. Some have said it is the government's responsibility while others say it should be the owners. In my view, I agree with the former view. This essay would discuss both views and my opinion.
To begin, the government should have the function of approving building plans to ensure conformity with the master plan, and i agree. In other words, they typically reserve certain areas for residential and business development for easy running of the cities. The supporters of the view believe if governments hands off building design, house owners would build houses indiscriminately which would disfigure the city's landscape. For example, edifice are built in commercial areas in major cities of the world in line with government's plan and this cluster create an amazing scenery.
In contrast, some people opine that funding parties of such project should have the prerogative of choosing what they want. People should be at a liberty to decide what they wish to build, after all it is their money being spent, i may wish a bungalow while the other man wants a storey building. For instance, in Victoria Island, Lagos, the buildings are not uniform and they serve both residential and commercial activities.
Although, there are diverse views on this issue, i believe government should determine and approve building designs so as to ensure people follow laid down plans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then, while, after all, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10505836576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63983936593 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5681543569 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335580274767 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116115494006 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561992599791 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208912965138 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451762728358 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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