To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is commonly believed that subjects such as mathematics and foreign language should be given more preference than art or music because mathematical skills and multi-language abilities are much required to secure a good job. Although these subjects have some significance in job-market, I disagree to a large extent with the belief that children should be taught to focus only on mathematics and foreign languages and not on art and music. The art and music showcase its culture and child showing interest in these subjects can play important role in preserving the cultural heritage of the country as well as gaining of descent employment.
The foremost reason for learning other subjects such as art and music is because of the cultural aspects associated with it which makes it valuable. Since time immemorial, these skills are in high demand and people knowing them are highly paid. In addition, students showing interest in such skills can showcase the cultural heritage of their country to the entire world along with earning name and fame. Thus, it is incorrect to say that art and music do not have value in job market. For instance, many actors and painters, who studied in art school turned out to be celebrity earning myriad of wealth.
Another reason for learning art and music is owing to the fact the modern world has jobs in each field and we see painters, musicians and dancer to earn handsome money due to their distinguish style in work. This can be exemplified by paintings of M.F. Hussain which were sold at expensive price. Consequently, it is proved that art and music is indispensable and is always bright option from job perspective.
However, there are arguments that support the need of mathematics and foreign language in competitive world. Apparently, everyone needs to have basic knowledge of calculations along with ways to communicate to survive in recent times. Consequently, it would not be entirely wrong to depict that business cannot sustain without these abilities.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that although mathematics and foreign language has its significance in today's world, it would be wrong if we do not teach them art and music related subjects. Moreover, artist and musicians too has awesome jobs, so it is not true to say that a child can get employment only by learning mathematics and science. Therefore, art and music are important and should be taught in every educational institute.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07178217822 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77746486872 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3496893293 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.529411765 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334711957129 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986328618833 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778695431604 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169954712341 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810095376735 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.