A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
A gift can play an impactful role in a child`s development. in this contemporary era, there are enormous things available to a child`s growth. some say that gifts like cameras, soccer balls are best for children to grow their development. I think that solving the cube or puzzle is the best gift for infants to expand their brain functionality.
In this fast-moving world, this is very important to give the best and meaningful gift to children to increase their capacity to grasp and understand.there are loads of benefits of puzzles in the early age of childhood development. firstly, they can try to solve that puzzle from holding puzzle pieces and turning them until they fit in the correct place. consequently, they can learn a physical skill. secondly, they can achieve color and letter awareness skills while solving puzzle games. thirdly, it also helps to learn basic skills such as concentration, patience, goal making, recognition, and many others. furthermore, also, it can help to improve memory and problem-solving skills.
Moreover, Dozen of studies have shown that children who are having skills to solve the puzzle cube in minimum time are genius and good in problem-solving of mathematics. also, In many parts of the world, cube or puzzle-solving competitions are held for children`s development.therefor, in my perspective, the best gift to give a child is games such as a puzzle, cube rather than a camera, a ball, an animal for their own growth.
To recapitulate it, I opine that puzzle-cube is the best gift for infants to develop their brain functionality and learn other skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1825095057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26816203003 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2420747197 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184460943052 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737137512012 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587612393304 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121794122888 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402288759216 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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