Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages and what your opinion is.
Nowadays, in many nations children are given extra money for their expenses. In my opinion, it is a good trend as it encourages children for future savings and they can buy what they need. This essay will discuss both pros and cons and will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, children can make savings for their future with the extra funds received from their parents. That is to say, if they have saved each dollar received every day, at the end of the day they will be saving huge amount which they can use in their future career planning. For instance, in China, approximately 55% of students are using their pocket money to set up the business when they are young. Likewise, children can fulfil their requirements with the pocket money. In other words, with that pin cash it is a piece of cake to buy whatever they like, so that they do not have to beg and depend on other to afford it.
However, with the extra fund children can engage in bad habits. When they take the money, no one knows what they are doing with it. Some may be buying tobaccos, alcohols and even drugs. To make the matter worse, they may use that in committing crime like murder. For example, according to The University of India, average number of children is using pocket notes in consuming alcohol and drugs.
In conclusion, with the help of extra cash, children can make future savings and can afford whatever they want, but with the same cash they may be involved in bad behaviours. However, with the proper guidance and support of family that money has more advantages than disadvantages
- Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries To what extend do you agree and disagree 61
- Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries To what extend do you agree and disagree 61
- Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries Discuss both advantages and disadvantages and what your opinion is 61
- Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries To what extend do you agree and disagree 61
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Suggestion:
... and will lead to a logical conclusion. To begin with, children can make savings...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63475177305 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28478069534 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9980116439 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140856003989 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618705422021 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516214683662 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105528552007 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05000583029 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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