Global Warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment.
What causes global warming?
What solutions are there to this problem?
Global Warming is a natural phenomenon of earth which helps it maintain its normal temperature and sustain ecosystem. However, recent human activities have triggered an increase in the rate of global temperature increase per year.
Apart form being a natural phenomenon, a plethora of human activates are responsible for global warming. First of all, as a result of population boom, more and more deforestation is done to make room for housing, commercial and leisure space to cope up. In order to meet increased demand of commercial goods, industrial space is increased which in turn contributes to industrial pollution. A recent study conducted by United Nations Environment Assembly suggests around 70% of air and water pollution around the world is due to industries. Moreover, an incline in automobile usage further amplifies the global warming issue as more and more cars burn fossil fuels and contribute to air pollution. This combined industrial and automobile pollution results in increased green house gases in the atmosphere and they can no longer be absorbed by trees as there is not enough green space on earth as a result of deforestation. In addition to that years of usage of CFCs/HCFCs in refrigerators and air conditioning units has resulted in ozone layer depletion over south pole. Unfortunately, that further increases the risk of global warming as harmful Ultraviolet rays from sun are trapped inside earth’s solar system.
Nevertheless, there are steps which we can take to slow the global warming and help recover our mother earth. Firstly, we need to stop being dependent on conventional resources of energy such as fossil fuel, coal and natural gas. Instead we should invest in renewable resources of energy like solar, hydro, wind, tidal and others. As we will shift to clean sources of energy, green house gases will slowly be absorbed by our forests. In addendum, we need to do afforestation and reforestation wherever possible, our natural forest cover acts as lungs of our earth as only forests can absorb harmful carbon dioxide.
In a nutshell, global warming is earth’s natural activity to control its temperature and help flourish flora and fauna. Human beings need to control their activities and focus shift on resources that do not affect environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintains'?
Suggestion: maintains
...ural phenomenon of earth which helps it maintain its normal temperature and sustain ecos...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: APART_FORM[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: Apart from
...lobal temperature increase per year. Apart form being a natural phenomenon, a plethora ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...h as fossil fuel, coal and natural gas. Instead we should invest in renewable resources...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23848238482 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87704063715 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6650943579 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160020471946 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554059554876 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588356206591 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104621979552 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171830351234 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.