The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.
To what extent do you agree?
Some people believe that the government should allocate more monetary resources for teaching science subjects at school and college level as compared to other subjects. While I believe that it is important to give more emphasis to science subjects, the importance of other subjects cannot be ignored completely. This essay shall focus on the benefits that students drive from learning science subjects as well as other humanities subjects.
On the one hand, science subjects promote rational thinking among the learners. In other words it generates curiosity in the minds of pupils and provides answers to most of the phenomenon that are happening around them. The students learn cause and effect relationship between various processes that are occurring in the surroundings. Further, investment in science and technology subjects prepares the students for future job prospects as with advancement and technological innovations, there are ample opportunities for employment in the area of science and technology. The more the job opportunities, the better will be the employment generation leading to economic growth and development.
On the other hand, teaching other subjects such as arts, languages and physical education are equally important. Teaching these subjects will help in overall personality development of the students. For example, studying arts at school or college level helps students to vent out their stress. It also acts as a medium to portray their feelings and emotions. Some children are blessed with creative abilities and helping such students to realize their potential and excel in their respective fields by recognizing these abilities will transform them into world class artists. Furthermore, other subjects like languages and physical education are equally important as studying languages will assist them to broaden their perspective and physical education will help them remain healthy and stay fit.
In conclusion, governments should not only allocate funding to science subjects but also to other subjects such as arts, languages and physical education for overall growth and development of the students in order to help the country to grow and prosper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cause'
Suggestion: to cause
...ppening around them. The students learn cause and effect relationship between various...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63063063063 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84991788335 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51951951952 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4132046677 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262271705819 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925806440942 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09369381575 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193417485802 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965396638012 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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