Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, the way money should be spent has become a challenging issue among people in the world. It has been shown that present-day societies highlight the importance of education and recreational activities simultaneously compared to the past. From my vantage point, it would be a good idea to allocate much more money to the process of teaching and learning. It will be proven by analyzing the areas of having a more intellectual and well-educated generation to come as well as expanding the horizons of first-hand knowledge and invention in the foreseeable future.
First of all, people would like to have had a more enlightened view by the time they become proficient in a specific major after learning a large amount of specialist knowledge. By the way of example, looking at the villagers’ and city dwellers’ lifestyle, we see that there is a world of difference between them which is an inevitable consequence of lacking adequate information and training. Therefore, if we have a better education system in the forthcoming years, the new generation will not suffer from anything in their lives. As a result of undergoing some training, people will become smart enough to hunt for a better situation which leads to a more prosperous future and town simultaneously.
Second of all, having an all-round education helps the community members experience a variety of subjects which result in startling discoveries and scientific achievements. To illustrate, Einstein, who developed the Theory of Relativity, completely revolutionized the way scientists understand space and time. It is crystal clear that prior knowledge will make a lasting impact upon the new generations; thus, spending a large sum of money on education will bring them a lot of benefits while searching for more wonderful inventions to facilitate life in its real sense. In brief, getting access to a large amount of knowledge and inventions, we come to the conclusion that money should be spent on how to train people.
However, it is beneficial to spend money on sports and entertainment industry. To demonstrate, certain sports tournaments, such as the Olympic Games and FIFA World Cup raise public happiness level, which are being held every four years. Moreover, the effect of routine exercise on each individual is so obvious that needs no explanation. Therefore, by providing more and more sports complexes or public places for daily exercise, many diseases such as Diabetes, Hypertension and different strokes will be prevented. Furthermore, it will improve the psychological conditions of people.
In conclusion, it is true to say that a cleverer generation and more discoveries and inventions are the reasons why we should spend money on people’s training. From a practical standpoint, spending money on education will be to the benefit of the people at any given time. It is recommended all facets of the issue be taken into account before making a decision as to how to spend money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in brief, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, by the way, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2526.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15191120922 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545833333333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.340759394 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.65 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163260358422 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522070412401 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041141880575 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101862420475 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487138231824 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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