Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays people who live in abroad are face with speaking foreign language and this may lead to serious social and practical problems. I completely agree with this statement.
Being unable to speak a foreign language could account isolation, because verbal communication is one of the vital skills in society in order to communicate with people otherwise, they may lose their confidence and could not able to interact with other people.people who immigrate aimlessly are a salient example Because they may not able to find friends or an appropriate job.
At the same time,practical issues may cause some serious problems such as unemployment because working in a foreign country requires that being able to speak that language as well. In this way people could find their ideal job quickly so,if a person does not know the language of a country ,even with experience and expertise,would not be successful to find a job. To illustrate, a knowledgeable teacher who can only speak English could not be a successful teacher in Italy because this action needed knowing Italian language.
In conclusion, one of the main needs of living abroad is being able to speak in that country language if not people encounter vary social and practical issues. In my vantage point people who want to living in a foreign country should prepare themselves and have a practical plan before immigration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12775330396 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85148301491 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541850220264 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5902611747 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28087312008 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149326250731 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737451091581 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191772008108 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917472543733 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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