Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is argued by some individuals that states should provide a huge financial aid to the artists. However, others do not agree and believe that helping artists is a wasteful step and this money can be utilized in other prospects. This essay will discuss both the notions followed by an opinion.
States aid artists financially to continue the rituals and tradition of the nation. Artists are the only individuals who acquire skills needed during festivals and celebrations. For instance, Ganpati festival in India demands a huge number of sculptures of Hindu God Ganpati to perform prayers of the god by followers, however, very few artists prefer to join this business as these jobs are economically poor, hence the government has to support them to continue the culture.
However, there are other factors which need dire attention and funds from the government such as poverty, poor hospitality, therefore, many individuals believe that supporting artists is need that important as humans basic needs are more vital to cover. For instance, A recent survey from the Nutrition department revealed that in India, around 60 per cent of newborn babies are malnutrition and die at an early age. Thus I share my notion with others who believe that the government should support human basic requirements on top priority rather than aiding artistes.
In conclusion, while artists work is vital for the nation to continue traditions to follow for many generations to come, I think the basic rights of human needs more attention and money from the authorities budget to support living standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70819309451 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8115225731 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937747763671 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400748622064 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334837807227 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062908536139 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377451812679 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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