The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Now a days, overweighting is becoming common among people. Some people suggest that we can overcome this problem with help of physical education lessons in school course. I would agree to this point to some extent and will also include some more solutions. Learning about physical fitness is related with food and physical activity, so we can make people more active through food and physical activity.
Obesity is root of all diseases; therefore, if we control overweighting and obesity in some way then we can get rid of a lot of diseases. It has many remedies and precautions which we can adopt to get rid from it. First thing is to educate people about the importance of physical education in all public institutions, not just in school, but school build our foundations, so at the beginning some life, children will become conscious about it. School administration can arrange different type of games for example football, cricket and baseball to promote the physical activity as well as fun in the school.
Schools should also give food chart to their students which increase learning power in them and reduce the obesity. On the other hand, obesity cannot control just with school contribution, parents should also play an active role. We can educate parents regrading it, through social media. Government should also ban the junk food in universities and school which cause harm to people`s health.
To sum up all the arguments, we would come to know that with help of schools, parents and government we can reduce the problem of overweighting but only school cannot play a significant role. This will also reduce the burden of government spending on health care system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69986535945 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2929516977 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199923444854 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074664367273 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625373540971 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131434234293 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628257066728 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.