Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Art is essential to refresh people`s mind, so they can work more efficiently. Government spending on art is worthwhile rather than a wastage. I support government spending on the arts because it enhances creativity, work efficiency and heritage of any country.
If we exam our daily routine, we will come to know that the modern fast life makes our lives boring and dull. Therefore, art brings color and refreshment in our lives we feel joyful and happy to utilize art facilities in our nearby. There are many countries like Australia, Canada, United Kingdom and United State which are spending money on museums and old building of the historical cities because it motivates the people to work hard like their ancestors. Through this channel, government can enhance the productivity and output of the workers.
Moreover, art of any country is heritage of that country. Government has to spend on country`s heritage because every country is recognized through his culture and art. People cannot afford big projects like art galleries and museums, if government build these art galleries and museums then it can charge tickets to their visitors to maintain it.
Spending on art by the government is not a useless effort, whereas it increases productivity of people to produce more output. On the other hand, any country is recognized through its art work, and it has huge cost which cannot afford by the people, so government should spend on the art to preserve its heritage and to increase productivity of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79170198983 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.93257107 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148693749503 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639987207669 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277354355203 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971614973722 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00527710983574 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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