With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on more GM foods.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
The scarcity of nutrition supply is becoming apparent, so some genetics scientists suggest solving this problem by transformed DNA. This essay will consider the pros and cons of this kind of food.
Let us begin with merits of food with modified genetic structure. The first advantage is that it is resistant to both illnesses and pesticides. Most vegetables and fruits perish in large numbers because of various diseases as well as unwanted insects, but genetically altered food are immune to many infections and have an unattractive smell for pesticides. Another benefit is that its production is relatively more fruitful. Food with modified genes can grow faster and bigger than traditional ones, so more people can feed on them. Furthermore, It can thrive in dry regions. Due to its ability to consume small amounts of water, this sort of vegetation can flourish, for example, in desserts or mountains.
Despite the above mentioned benefits, genetically modified foodstuff has many drawbacks. First of all, it may cause some serious disorders. Food with generic modification has allegedly resulted in a few cases of cancer, but medicine organization has not acknowledged these incidents yet. Secondly, genetically altered food has some negative impacts on the environment. When it penetrates the soil as household waste, it usually poisons trees and small animals. Finally, it is hardly possible to find traditional food in large markets. Genetically modified food is prevailing in the market thanks to its low price and making the sale of conventional food unprofitable; therefore, if one wants to buy unaltered vegetables, they have to address private gardeners.
In conclusion, genetically changed food has both positive and negative sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43223443223 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95809715768 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644688644689 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0801663173 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2352941176 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103458730741 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326897639904 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357888001275 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566831312025 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494346259034 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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