Nowadays, it is believed that The growth of online shooping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. In this essay I completely agree with this statement because it has more demerit rather than demerit for some reasons.
In the one hand, the main benefit of online grocery which is rising recently is makes everyone who has daily needs will be easier to supply their thing, it is because people can manage their purchase from home, for example when person need something while they have a lot of tasks in their job, as result it makes people can order their needs from their gadgets. It is important that technolgy possibility can bring people who hectic can be flexible to manage their time.
However there are some drawback of this problem, firstly, it makes everyone in their region that has profession as a seller will has decreasing in their income, it is due to average people will be move to use their application to complete their things, take as on example currently amount of customer user online store has quickly increased, as result it make small store in average region closed their business. Secondly, rising of unemployement in the state which has extremly online store, it is because their job has decline of income, as on example every single person who has clothes store recently has rarely visitor who want to buy something from their shop, nevertheless it makes their business will be bankrupt. It is important that increasing of online store without control can affected to poor society who has store in their city.
From where I stand, I believe government should made regulation to manage their residents has guarantee about their daily needs while increasing of online shops in their country bring negative to their citizens
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a hectic'.
Suggestion: who is a hectic
... technolgy possibility can bring people who hectic can be flexible to manage their time. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... can be flexible to manage their time. However there are some drawback of this problem...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...on that has profession as a seller will has decreasing in their income, it is due t...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ore has quickly increased, as result it make small store in average region closed th...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'guaranteed'.
Suggestion: guaranteed
...egulation to manage their residents has guarantee about their daily needs while increasin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89368770764 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38397500585 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508305647841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.093442967 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.125 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176219938635 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12794002983 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.233629251194 0.0667982634062 350% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145891441608 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151365088189 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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