The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agress or disagree?
In recent years, with the growth of internet, online shopping has become a trend. This has changed people's way of shopping; now-a-days more people shop online and not by visiting shops or malls. It is believed that this new way of shopping will put all the shops out of business. I completely disagree, and think that due to authenticity of products available in shops and the delivery time the shops will keep functioning.
The time required for the delivery of an online purchased item is higher which is one reason the general population opts to visit a shop. This is because, one can enter a shop and buy products without having to wait, which is not the case when it comes to buying things from an online store. For example, husbands and boyfriends often realise their anniversary dates on the day itself, which leaves them with a very short amount of time to buy gifts for their partners. Unless we have shops, this kind of impromptu shopping would not be possible, which is why shops in towns and cities will stay in demand, even if the online websites will receive more share of the business.
Another compelling point to consider is the lack of trust people have on the e-commerce websites. Although, online stores offers a variety of products and discounts, people find it difficult to trust the quality provided by them. As a result, they prefer to visit the retail outlets where they can check the product standards on the stop before purchasing. This not only avoids the overheads of contacting the customer support for reporting the issues, but also support reputation of brands.
In conclusion, although internet based shopping provides more seamless experience, factors such as delivery time and skepticism of shoppers will keep the traditional ways of shopping in existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94389438944 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56546267834 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5510697615 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310599586339 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115194795025 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902612470776 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1811937833 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119829488097 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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