The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
There is no deny that taobao, amazon have a huge impact on our economic system recent years. Many store are struggle to survive under the shadow of E-ecommerce, Some people believe that eventually all shops will be close in the future. In this essay I will explain why i agree with this opinion followed with my reasons.
One of the reason that local store can not compete with online shopping is that online shopping have more economic scale. They contain a wide range of product category for customer to select.From huge facilities such as television to small daily utensil such as tooth brush. This is a need that shops can never satisfy. Due to the limit space of the store, they can only provide limited product category.
Online shopping can also offer product which is much cheaper than local store in general. Most of the product we purchase online were directly sent from the factory. Whereas the product in store has already been go through couple middle man, which add additional value to product itself. Result in a higher price.
Finally,Online shopping is always the best option for indoorsman which is the majority of the population today. customer can place an order online with only few simple steps. With online shopping’s sophisticate backstage system and efficient delivery system. Your product could be deliver to you in next day. This attract many customer to choose online shopping rather than driving to a local store to purchase for necessities.
In a nut shell, the process of online shopping replace stores in towns and cities is inevitable. People should learn to cope with this trend and take benefit from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, whereas, as to, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96389891697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44967595852 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7310401248 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3888888889 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242528668199 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772873390741 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742213943287 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134567980795 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409353294333 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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