The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree.
In the modern era, the consume has become an essential part of every day. And with this consume brought some changes habits into to society. And new habits impact on social life.In this essay I will examine both side of the argument.
Generally speaking there are a wide range of different reason why people choice to online shopping. First of all, I partially agree the online shopping will bet most common than the traditional one. Because the shopping on internet has more advantage than disadvantage. For illustrate, the internet provide the safely shopping at home or office. Moreover, for most people such as business woman time arrangement is vital due they don’t want to spend a lot of time for buying something. And also when using on internet they be able to find a lot of variety different option in concurrent. As as result, significant part of people using on online shopping therefore most of shopping center closing their venue in town.
However, despite of these arguments the rest of the people ensure shopping at real places such as mall or local center. With this people the traditional shopping will have being sustain in the society.Because these for this people buying some thing not just a simple action.In this leisure time has becoming social activities for them.With this way the communication always increasing in the community.For example, some shopping center has also a cafe in the side. When they are buying what they need it also they be able to talk with each other.Finally, I believe this people always will be protect their old and traditional shopping center.
In conclusion, I support the online shopping because it’s easy furthermore pratic. Despite the all of advantages on online shopping, the local shopping center has being always popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11486486486 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68908520443 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9282866623 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220322855905 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884821197739 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825337137168 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141794986499 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744941117782 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.