Having a good university guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?
University degrees attract people for different reasons. Many contend that holding a degree from high-rank universities is a guarantee to have more suitable jobs. I, for one, I strongly disagree with this opinion and this essay will outline the reasons for that.
To begin with, it is a complete false belief to assume that decrease alone or able to make us great job seekers. To explain more, nowadays, almost all of the recruiting agencies look for the candidates who not only have the knowledge, but also many variety of skills such as: computer skills, the level of foreign languages specially English, hand hands-on experience. A great example is when the Google corporation announced that they were recruiting some employees four different positions in 2013. Surprisingly enough, the ones with more experience and the skills related to the positions, regardless of their university degrees, were hired. As a result, although it can have a good impression under employers, however, it seems that it does not guarantee anything.
To addition to this, universities only focus on topics based knowledge and theories which, said by many experts, does not prepare the graduates for life. The problem begins when a student has completed his course, after many years of hard study, and no companies nor agencies take the risk of giving these newly graduates a chance; and the reason, indeed, is obvious. As most economist in this field believe, having a university, no matter from which ones, will never replace the lack of the primary and basic skills required in today's business. A study conducted in Tehran in 2019, revealed that over 70% of the bachelor holders working as an uber driver.
To conclude, as the best CEO's always claim, whether one desires to be successful in the road of business, focusing and gaining experience and learning new techniques and ideas, which current modern world requires, is a necessity and they definitely outweigh having a degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65794243717 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66149068323 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2390794515 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130137023525 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466697930393 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547446071504 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698764261154 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422686444532 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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