A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, get lots of exercises and avoids stress.
What do people do to stay healthy in your country?
The whole world is becoming health conscious and as a result, the people opting for appropriate calories' intake, different forms of workout and, the retreats. To become and stay healthy is a lifestyle and it is embodied all the aspects of one's day to day routine.
Different countries' dwellers have their respective way of living and eating habits which mainly influence their health. One cannot be healthy only because he/she exercises rather it also depends on the diet he/she takes. These healthy habits and active lifestyle directly results in the average increase of lifespan. Most of the developed countries in the world have a higher average life expectancy compared to developing nations. The prime reason for this advantage is an active lifestyle which involves proper nutrition in the food, exercise or some sort of activity and shunning the stress. While the problems of the underdeveloped world are mainly food related, as a result, children are having stunt growth.
I belong to a developing nation and people are adapting to the healthy behaviors. The government is actively spreading awareness about the importance of the workout through different media channels. There is also a sharp increase in the availability of public parks equipped with modern facilities which are the manifestation of shifting preferences to be healthy.
Most of the women and children visit parks and sports facilities whereas the youth opt for traditional sports like wrestling, pole climbing, and rope stretching. The older people prefer to walk and help the youth in the fields to stay active. Furthermore, the intake of proper food is also becoming popular and many in my own circle started to avoid carbonated drinks and foods which are too sweet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
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Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion: One
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21985815603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70744622794 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8010409351 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126138110108 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043671900841 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410498054947 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820481515441 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142255588465 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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